Sunday, November 25, 2012

Allegory of the Cave Sonnet

Can you see the light
The truth behind the shadows
At first it maybe bright
But then you see the meadows

 It takes a special person
To venture down an unfamiliar path
For others their condition will worsen
Being continually trapped by societies wrath

 They say ignorance is bliss
But that's a false hood
A half minded man should truly miss
Living in lies is simply no good

 The moral of this story is find our own reality
Only then can you be completely free in your spirituality
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17 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 6:42 PM

    Nice sonnet and rhyming!
    Please comment on mind :)

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  2. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 7:29 PM

    i like you sonnet! i enjoyed reading it :) the first stanza is my favorite :) nice job!

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  3. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 7:38 PM

    Good job with the rhyming!!

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  4. Bernardog236November 25, 2012 at 7:41 PM

    I liked your rhyme scheme. Good job!

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  5. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 7:48 PM

    Awesome sonnet. Liked how it rhymed and flowed.

    Please comment on mine.
    http://pkimrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/11/allegory-of-caves-sonnet.html

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  6. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 7:51 PM

    Great rhyming! Nice job! :D

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  7. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    Good job! I enjoyed the rhyming :)

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  8. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 8:01 PM

    Nice job on the Sonnet. one of my favorites so far.

    Please comment on mine
    http://dtomookarhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com

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  9. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 8:04 PM

    Nice job with rhyming through out the sonnet! Great Job!

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  10. LauraTrenevNovember 25, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    I agree with everyone else, nice rhyming. Also, in the third line maybe should be may be. Nice work. And thank you for the comment.

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  11. AnonymousNovember 25, 2012 at 8:54 PM

    Nice job Haleigh!:) i love the last two lines, great job overall!

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  12. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    I really like the first stanza! It sums up the allegory well. The structure and rhyming follow a sonnets' so your structure is great! Overall, great job :)

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  13. UnknownNovember 25, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    This is one of the best I've read,
    its really good.
    nice job (:

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  14. JackieNovember 25, 2012 at 9:42 PM

    Great sonnet! I loved it. Very nice job. :)

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  15. Mackenzie GreeleyNovember 25, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    I thought it was entertaining and I noticed that the 'w' was missing from wrath... Was that on purpose? Just something I noticed while reading, but it was really a nice flow throughout the sonnet.

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  16. SneetchfaceNovember 26, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    I liked what I got from this sonnet. The idea that each person should find their own truth, and their own spirituality. Also, some really nice imagery.

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